According to my animation professor, this is my "The Test"... As in, The Test that I start to understand how this stuff works. I have to agree. This is my most recent take on this old piece of radio dialogue.
And for comparison's sake, this was my first pass.
After a lot of restarting and redrawing, I've made quite a bit of progress. I can't wait to move on to the next test so that I can translate what I've learned on this one.